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Face to face, we never dreamed,
We’d be exactly how we seemed,
Though demons still attempt to cling,
My angel never lost her wings.

But as your fears begin to burn,
A hole in everything you’ve learned,
Your soul can still cry out in vain,
Against your truthful words, again.

And as you shine,
Forever mine,
I’m waiting for,
The fall divine.

Unlocked, unhinged, and open wide,
She wants to see what’s left inside,
And while your mind is full of doubt,
It’s time to blow the candles out.

Ethereal and wandering,
A soul that longs to hear you sing,
And now I’m naked in your eyes,
Come cradle me with lullabies.

And as you shine,
As I decline,
I’m waiting for,
The fall divine.

And as you shine,
Forever mine,
I’m waiting for,
The fall divine.
©2008-2009 =N-One
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Author's Comments

So yeah, this came out of left field xD A few people might guess what caused this, but still, I like it :D

20 points for whoever gets the candle idea

Might descriptionise more later, I'm tired xD

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:iconhoshi-twilight-star:
This is really lovely =]

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It's love's illusions I recall. I really don't know love, at all.
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I'm glad you like it :)

Any CC? Favourite bit?

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This is beautiful :)
The start gave me the first impression (naturally) and
that`s why I like that part best:

Face to face, we never dreamed,
We’d be exactly how we seemed,
Though demons still attempt to cling,
My angel never lost her wings.

LOVELY :D

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This was not my idea
:iconhoshi-twilight-star:
uhhh

not currently xD

I'll get back to you.....

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It's love's illusions I recall. I really don't know love, at all.
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:XD: ok dear :)

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:iconhoshi-twilight-star:
the candles are your worries...

my favorite part was this...

Ethereal and wandering,
A soul that longs to hear you sing,
And now I’m naked in your eyes,
Come cradle me with lullabies.


cause yea..the whole thing flows really well and sounds all prettish but this was just my favorite xD

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It's love's illusions I recall. I really don't know love, at all.
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ooo...now see, I like that explanation better than mine! Although it seems to work too well for me not to have thought about it that way at all...maybe subconsciously or something xD

ooo :) any particular reason why twas your fave?

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:D thank you! any crit at all?

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:iconjulesthenorweegie:
Errrrrrhh, well hmmm uh.....


NO!
:P


What? Are you disappointed I don`t have anything to
criticise (sp?!) there? :P

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